Mortality

Fading sun reflects
Day’s coming mortality
In mirror below

Darkness approaches
Senses’ highest altitude
During departure

Memory dissolves
Revitalized tomorrow
In coming morning


Image taken from Pinterest

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12 thoughts on “Mortality

    1. I was actually considering just leaving it with the first haiku, but then decided to go with all 3. The first one probably could have went alone with mortality, but then added the next two to suggest reincarnation and add a little spiritual dimension to it. And thank you, I’m happy you enjoyed it! πŸ™‚

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      1. I read the entire composition twice …it is beautiful! Then the first 3 lines just drew me in again and again …they feel complete as a unit to me :), have a kind of resonance with a poem I had done, …yet I feel there was more beauty in your words to convey the same.

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